Pervious years rought cut Vs final cut

After watching many existing music ideas, we then started to watch previous years music videos and began to pick apart the video's, by saying what we thought was good about them and what could be improved.
We watched a pupils video from last year and compared their rough cut to their final cut. The group achieves an A for their music video. We later discussed how and why we thought they got an A for their project and took inspiration from their shots to use in our music video.

From this, it has given us a good idea on what we can include in our music video in order to get an A as well as what not to include.