Plan for acting on teachers feedback

So, after getting some constructive feedback from our teacher we are going to put a plan in place to act on this feedback. Since posting the last blog, we have now established that we need to re film some more after getting feedback. This is our plan:

• Re film the clip of Helen and Alex walking out of the house- changing their facial expressions from 'determined' to happy. We are going to do this on Monday lunchtime
• Re edit the length of the clips where people have the words on their heads and masks on, so it matches the beat rather then them all being the same length
• Instead of the mask coming towards the camera although the audience are putting it on, we are going to change this to Alex and Helen taking it off the camera. Giving the impression to the audience that it is okay to reveal who they are- like Helen and Alex have done at the end of the video
• Don't cut from one angle to a similar angle in performance
• Re edit the direction in which Alex is walking as he is always walking the same way