Teachers feedback on final cut
We think we are finished our music video!!! However we are going to ask Mr Bland for some general feedback on our video & ask him if there is anything that we possibly need to re film and re edit.
After watching the whole video twice, Mr Bland ages us some positive and negative feedback...
Positive feedback
'The first third of the video is bang on- the footage of the narrative and the performance matched the beat of the music really well. It is so much better than your rough cut- it really is. The whole of the narrative is in focus and the lighting is really good. The dramatic dropping of the mask looks really effective'
Constructive criticism
'There is a slightly awkward edit at the beginning where Adam begins to sing.' We are going to re edit this part at the beginning of the video to make sure that it doesn't look as staged.
'You've made 2 shots of the performance too similar and they are next to each other, this doesn't look right.' We are going to remove one of these shots at the beginning of the video and just keeping 1 of them and letting it last the whole duration.
'The scene where there are heads shots of both people wearing the mask and the scenes where they don't have mask on but have the word on their head doesn't always cut on the beat. You have the start of the editing correct, but by the end the beat of the editing just doesn't match. Although I can see that you have kept all the clips to the same length of time, I think its going to look better if they match the beat- even if this DOES mean cutting them to different lengths.' We are going to edit the length of the clips and get them to match the beat, instead of having all the clips the exact same length.
'The part of your video where the main protagonist is walking thought the street looks a bit odd
After watching the whole video twice, Mr Bland ages us some positive and negative feedback...
Positive feedback
'The first third of the video is bang on- the footage of the narrative and the performance matched the beat of the music really well. It is so much better than your rough cut- it really is. The whole of the narrative is in focus and the lighting is really good. The dramatic dropping of the mask looks really effective'
Constructive criticism
'There is a slightly awkward edit at the beginning where Adam begins to sing.' We are going to re edit this part at the beginning of the video to make sure that it doesn't look as staged.
'You've made 2 shots of the performance too similar and they are next to each other, this doesn't look right.' We are going to remove one of these shots at the beginning of the video and just keeping 1 of them and letting it last the whole duration.
'The scene where there are heads shots of both people wearing the mask and the scenes where they don't have mask on but have the word on their head doesn't always cut on the beat. You have the start of the editing correct, but by the end the beat of the editing just doesn't match. Although I can see that you have kept all the clips to the same length of time, I think its going to look better if they match the beat- even if this DOES mean cutting them to different lengths.' We are going to edit the length of the clips and get them to match the beat, instead of having all the clips the exact same length.
'The part of your video where the main protagonist is walking thought the street looks a bit odd
- middle clip of wlaking- chnage direction of him wlaking isntead of wlaking to the left all the time
- dramatic mask drop -good
- get rid of adam not looking at camera
- all clips the same lenth of the words on head but they dont match the lenth
- mask at the end get away form the camera instead
- Alex and helen scene leabng the hiuse- too detmermand- doesnt lok happy- need to re film.
- alex and helen hol;ding hand up and taking mask off the at the edn- not on a blakc background.
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