Last Minute teacher feedback

Just before exporting we thought we would get our teacher to look over our digipack and advert to see if there was any final changes we could make. Regarding our digipack he said that we should check all spellings but apart from that he said he really liked it. For our advert he said that in order to gain higher marks for 'originality' we should do something else to it to make it look different to the digipack as the image on the front of our digipack is very similar to our advert image. He suggested to maybe change the direction that Adam is facing or using a different image instead of the city lights on the advert or adding colour to the text.

So, acting on our teacher feedback, we reversed the images to make Adam a silhouette on a background of lights. This looks much more effective as it is the same style as the front cover of our digipack however it isn't exactly the same which makes it more original which is what we were told to do. We also changed the direction which Adam was facing just to make it even more different.

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